Sky-Minded Poem by Delilah Miller

Sky-Minded

Rating: 3.6


Blue sky,
blue sky.

Looking at you, wishing the day by.

Blue sky,
purple sky.

Storm coming in, here it is, there's the eye.

Blue sky,
grey sky.

The earth is wailing, the thunder yells, and the clouds cry.

Blue sky,
grey sky,
black sky.

Tore away at the moon, swallowed stars, listened to the sun die.

Black sky
Green sky
Orange sky
Red sky
Pink and yellow and mean sky.

Come on and roll in; it's only in my mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

In a unique style you said many things in this short poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 November 2015

Superb poem. Displayed bubbling enthusiasm and naughtiness in narrating motley shades of hues encompassed in the sky in poet's imaginations. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Swallowed stars! ! With the works of nature. Nice work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2015

Nicely done about different colors of the sky and their significance.

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Loyloy 05 January 2018

I myself should say that you did a great job on starting and ending your poem. And to get to the point, I like the way you describe the color of different skies you see with your own eyes each day.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 November 2015

I love the last line, It's only in my mind. Disasters can befall anyone, but how we handle them is what matters; Yes, I agree; we need to be sky-minded, look at the broader picture. Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 29 November 2015

A very interesting poem with symbolic implications.. Thanks for sharing..

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Rahman Henry 29 November 2015

Black sky Green sky Orange sky Red sky Pink and yellow and mean sky.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2015

Amazing expression of sentiments through the colours of sky. Great articulation. I quote: Pink and yellow and mean sky / Black sky / Green sky / Orange sky / Red sky / Pink and yellow and mean sky / Come on and roll in; it's only in my mind.

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