Sky Is Falling Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Aimlessly roam as foreign objects Slowly loosing their heights and become reject sky is posing problem becasue of objects...10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling it is mad race in the sky...10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling Aimlessly roam as foreign objects Slowly loosing their heights and become reject -------- poignant piece yet done outstanding with finest rhymes and diction...10+++

Sky seems to be flooded and falling it has turned int junk yard..10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling debries may fall any time and cause heavy damage...10

this is very clear that your poem based on what is the essence of human and world. you manage to bring it into words which understandable and deeper meaning for people who can read beyond sentence.

We have remained as closely guarded Many praises and nicely worded

We are large family and galaxy of stars, Look so close but miles far

We are distinct and never collide Some of us may drift and slightly slide Leave high rays with friction of seconds Does not harm earth even for moments

sjy is full of unuseful objects....10