Sky Is All Yours Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha

Sky Is All Yours

Rating: 5.0


Yesterday’s gone
like disappearing clouds
like vanishing stars
like passing twilight
like fading moonlight

Leaving memories
of stress and fun
of rest and run
of hope and despair
of scare and care

It’s the time
to reflect on past glories
to bury bitter memories
to match a flowing stream
to catch the next dream

So, my friend!
grab with both hands
happiness is all yours
give wings to your dreams
sky is all yours

(Dedicated to one of my friends who is going to pursue his post graduation at a very reputed university. Wishing him a successful journey ahead.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayz LFlynn 09 January 2010

Well Deependra I must say I found this poem most powerful! The lay out and rhyming scheme was brilliant! And the over theme was... as I said powerful! keep writing! Sayz :)

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Lynn Glover 09 January 2010

We know the sky is the limit and you have given us that and much more in your poem. We are able to rest knowing that we can drift through the clouds and the stars through your great write. Very good write, I like the rhythm and structure. Your friend in poetry Lynn

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Mohammed Albalushi 09 January 2010

and the glory is all yours, well write dear

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Lady Grace 09 January 2010

well expressed..nicely done..expressive

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Bob Blackwell 10 January 2010

We must grab all of life's opportunities with both hands. I wish your friend well as he continues his studies.

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Surya . 29 March 2010

BEAUTIFUL WRITE.GREAT THOUGHT LINES. VOTED10 SURYA

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Alf Hutchison 19 January 2010

Deependra you have a wonderful way with words...I have said it before and I say it again... you are an excellent poet... thanks for the invite Regards Alf

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Reshma Ramesh 19 January 2010

filled with best wishes........good one!

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Jester's P 14 January 2010

yes the sky is all yours...meaning you are free to dream, to do something about it, to face its chalenge, and of course to be what you are after all... the poem is an expression of deep concern to someone (as your dedication stated) ...however, it should be noted that freedom is always something you are bound with, 'we are born free, to be found in it'...thanks for the poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 11 January 2010

'...........................time to reflect on past glories to bury bitter memories to match a flowing stream to catch the next dream'... quoted lines are poetic good...bring in a wish an attitude that's good...

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