! ! ...Sky Poem by Seema Aarella

! ! ...Sky

Rating: 3.4


Infinitesimal globules of
Rain seed germinate in
The impregnated clouds
Those tread with caution
Escorted by a throng of
Equally overjoyed cumulus!

The color palette lies
Undisturbed in arched stupor
Ignored, untouched by
The painter’s skillful hands
Leaving a pint of dull blue
All over my morbid firmament!

Sometimes in grip of sheer
Desperation, a faint streak
Of lightening slices through
The cordon of fortification
In a bold act to announce
The feelings of perturbed heart!

The day draws to a close
In consorted monotony
As the whirling events
Adopt an elephantine gait
And sun perishes slowly
To divulge a swarm of shadows!

He retrieves his kites,
From the region of my sky
Exits my furnished vicinity,
Ignoring signs of gathering desire
That’s likely to descend on him
In uncontrolled cascades of love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 30 December 2008

Seema, by imagery, structure, composition I feel this is one of your best poems. U created so many vivid pictures; a kind of dreamland for the readers.

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Sarah Sisson 30 December 2008

That is very beautiful...well penned!

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Indira Babbellapati 30 December 2008

...sky is the limit to ur creativity!

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Raj Nandy 30 December 2008

I enjoy reading poems about the sky.In fact my longest poem is about the sky - ' Vsions of the Vast Blue Empyrean', which very few readers had the patience to read! 10 for your poem! - Raj Nandy

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Aijaz Asif 30 December 2008

bravo, bravo a marvellous write Seema ji, you have wrote on the sky of life so beautifully, i loved it thanks for sharing 10++++++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif

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Anjali Sinha 11 January 2009

ahaaaa the sky with all the colours from the palette nicely painted on your canvas -10 anjali

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Dr Kamran Haider 05 January 2009

its really a beautiful poem... powerful n well put words, skillfully written and over all a well iamgined and justified poem... thanks for sharing...

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 31 December 2008

words are mastered. well ornemented sky. enjoyable.

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Reshma Ramesh 31 December 2008

beautiful seema as always.........you weave words well............well penned

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Chitra - 30 December 2008

your beautiful words sketch vivid pictures across the celestial canopy of my mind a sure shot respite from the daily grind

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