Skin Deep Poem by Leria Hawkins

Skin Deep

Rating: 4.7


Who would think a rose so sweet
Would dry and crumble at my feet
And blooms that scent my night and day
Would steal my heart, then fade away

With petals soft and fondly red
Sweet essence fills my addled head
Then turns to dust before my eyes
Leaving naught, but my surprise

Who would think such thorny vine
Could lift a blossom as divine
And by the stem on which it stands
Could so wrong my offered hand

Such strength and beauty is rarely true
A blessing owned by very few
As 'neath the soil, in winters keep
There sleeps a rose to tear my cheek

Who would think that perfect bloom
Could be a bane, a curse of doom
So fine a sight, yet in disguise
A rose to prick and blind my eyes

Friday, April 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 11 March 2024

The thorn has pricked me but I was too far from the flower!

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PREMKUMAR C N 07 December 2022

Beautiful rhyme and beautiful images.

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Captain Cur 31 December 2020

A beautifully composed piece, words that both describe the thorns and petals of love.

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Lyn Paul 12 April 2014

Beautiful words Leria, I must purchase a garden of roses to keep me 39 forever. Thank you

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 April 2014

This is beautiful poetry with a smooth flow and nice rhyme.Loved it.

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