Sitting On The Ring Of Saturn Poem by Neela Nath Das

Sitting On The Ring Of Saturn

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You frighten me,
scare me,
sitting on the
ring of Saturn.
But, the silver-light
the moon borrows
from the sun,
makes your face
bright and mild.
I sit on my knees
to grasp the beauty
of the blue
and the magic
light together.
True love
drenches my
spirit freely.

Sunday, March 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 24 March 2014

this one looks like a part of the other poem YOU, as it has the same apostrophizing touch!

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Bill Cantrell 29 March 2014

..the silver light that the moon borrows from the sun...I love your choice of words, Great poem.

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Md Elias Uddin 27 March 2014

True love drenches my spirit freely. Nice!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 March 2014

Some times it may be fine to see someone sitting on the ring of Saturn even if not welcome otherwise.Nice thought provoking poem. Thank you.

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Chuy Amante 26 March 2014

Simply and exquisitely cosmic! I love it's flow and message! ! ! Get busy and pen more! ! Big Fan here!

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Neela Nath Das 24 March 2014

shahzia, thanks dear.Yes, You the word sometimes gives us delight, sometimes pain.Yet to get the proper place in our heart......Love.

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