Neela Nath


Sitting On the Ring Of Saturn


You frighten me,
scare me,
sitting on the
ring of Saturn.
But, the silver-light
the moon borrows
from the sun,
makes your face
bright and mild.
I sit on my knees
to grasp the beauty
of the blue
and the magic
light together.
True love
drenches my
spirit freely.

Submitted: Sunday, March 23, 2014
Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014

Topic(s): love


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  • Bill Cantrell (3/29/2014 6:05:00 AM)

    ..the silver light that the moon borrows from the sun...I love your choice of words, Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/26/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    Some times it may be fine to see someone sitting on the ring of Saturn even if not welcome otherwise.Nice thought provoking poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Mr. Nobody (3/26/2014 1:59:00 PM)

    Simply and exquisitely cosmic! I love it's flow and message! ! !

    Get busy and pen more! !

    Big Fan here! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (3/24/2014 9:18:00 PM)

    shahzia, thanks dear.Yes, You the word sometimes gives us delight, sometimes pain.Yet to get the proper place in our heart......Love. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (3/24/2014 1:35:00 PM)

    this one looks like a part of the other poem YOU, as it has the same apostrophizing touch! (Report) Reply

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