Neela Nath


Sitting On The Ring Of Saturn - Poem by Neela Nath

You frighten me,
scare me,
sitting on the
ring of Saturn.
But, the silver-light
the moon borrows
from the sun,
makes your face
bright and mild.
I sit on my knees
to grasp the beauty
of the blue
and the magic
light together.
True love
drenches my
spirit freely.


Comments about Sitting On The Ring Of Saturn by Neela Nath

  • Veteran Poet - 1,684 Points Bill Cantrell (3/29/2014 6:05:00 AM)

    ..the silver light that the moon borrows from the sun...I love your choice of words, Great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 126 Points Elias Uddin (3/27/2014 10:29:00 PM)

    True love
    drenches my
    spirit freely.

    Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,710 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/26/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    Some times it may be fine to see someone sitting on the ring of Saturn even if not welcome otherwise.Nice thought provoking poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,631 Points Mr. Nobody (3/26/2014 1:59:00 PM)

    Simply and exquisitely cosmic! I love it's flow and message! ! !

    Get busy and pen more! !

    Big Fan here! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/24/2014 9:18:00 PM)

    shahzia, thanks dear.Yes, You the word sometimes gives us delight, sometimes pain.Yet to get the proper place in our heart......Love. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (3/24/2014 1:35:00 PM)

    this one looks like a part of the other poem YOU, as it has the same apostrophizing touch! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014


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