Sierra Breeland

Rookie (07-05-01 / Livonia)

Sister Sister - Poem by Sierra Breeland

Sister Sister

My sister is funny
she likes to eat money

I can't wait till she goes to school
she might have a lot of work to do

I will have to teach her how to spell
I never want to be in hell

My Sister is a tease
She is always making me freeze

She is so great
I do believe in fate

I am only seven
But I know all about heaven

My sister is almost two
I will have to teach her to tie her shoes

My sister I love to death
She is sometimes a mess

My sister i will never forget
She needs to learn not to hit

I love you so
Thank you for being my sister
I will miss you so

Comments about Sister Sister by Sierra Breeland

  • Gold Star - 50,465 Points Chinedu Dike (6/24/2015 4:04:00 PM)

    The diction of the piece is simple, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,341 Points Bernard Snyder (6/24/2015 8:26:00 AM)

    You did a great job Sierra. Keep writing. I won't be surprise if your is mentioned amongst the greatest one day. Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,579 Points John Richter (6/24/2015 7:52:00 AM)

    Michael Joseph, you are a cad. Please adhere to your mother's rule stating that if you have nothing nice to say then say nothing at all. Or was your mother's voice limited to the howling of a jackal? Because that is what your comment appears to be. Everyone else who comes here, will you please hit the dislike button on Michael's comment and hit the like button on all the positive comments here? Please? This seven year old poet rhymed every one of her couplets.... Oh the insensitive nature of some people just appalls me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 469 Points Gauri Sharma (6/24/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    really nice and i think you have great sense of writing.keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,766 Points Michael Joseph (6/24/2015 1:40:00 AM)

    This is the poem of the day? ? ? Really? ! !
    How are these chosen?
    I thought this was a serious poem site
    Isn't being at least 18 a prerequisite? C'mon PH! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (10/14/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    so your sister is a tease.....well sisters are a tease because they test your love and teach you that love can be mysterious...that makes you love somebody from whom you even wanna escape but cannot live away for long as well...............true and simple (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Melvin Banggollay (1/18/2009 11:06:00 PM)

    Little sister
    this is a great masterprice
    keep writing my dear fellow

    thanks and take care,

    melvin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie MES PLGB (1/17/2009 1:53:00 AM)

    Wow! Amazing write! Love it! Go Girl! Keep writing! and keep me updated on any new poems u have! : P (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Breeland (1/16/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    Great Job Sierra
    You have great talent! ! !
    It's good to be the big sister me and your dad are great siblings. And now you get to be a Big sister and show her the ropes just like your dad showed me! ! He taught me how to ride a bike. Keep being a great sister and I love you both so much.

    Kiss Kiss
    Auntie April (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/16/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    Sisterly writes full of love.Yeahh the little teaser is growin up.sweet piece Sierra. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (1/16/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    Nothing else like a big sister to teach (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (1/16/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    Yes i agree with you Sierra the little brat savanna is still very cute.. She needs to learn a lot and I am happy you can help her with that you are such a great big sister savanna and you are wonderful i love you both so much..

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dan Perry (1/16/2009 1:09:00 AM)

    you're right sierra savanna can be a mess... Cute poem

    Uncle danny (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ying Escalona (1/16/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    wow..great sister.i admire you so much darling... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2009