Sister Sister Poem by Sierra Breeland

Sister Sister

Rating: 3.3




Sister Sister

My sister is funny
she likes to eat money

I can't wait till she goes to school
she might have a lot of work to do

I will have to teach her how to spell
I never want to be in hell

My Sister is a tease
She is always making me freeze

She is so great
I do believe in fate

I am only seven
But I know all about heaven

My sister is almost two
I will have to teach her to tie her shoes

My sister I love to death
She is sometimes a mess

My sister i will never forget
She needs to learn not to hit

SISTER SISTER
I love you so
Thank you for being my sister
I will miss you so

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvin Banggollay 18 January 2009

Little sister this is a great masterprice keep writing my dear fellow thanks and take care, melvin

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MES PLGB 17 January 2009

Wow! Amazing write! Love it! Go Girl! Keep writing! and keep me updated on any new poems u have! : P

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you're right sierra savanna can be a mess... Cute poem Uncle danny

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Yes i agree with you Sierra the little brat savanna is still very cute.. She needs to learn a lot and I am happy you can help her with that you are such a great big sister savanna and you are wonderful i love you both so much.. Krista

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Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

Nothing else like a big sister to teach

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Chinedu Dike 24 June 2015

The diction of the piece is simple, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard Snyder 24 June 2015

You did a great job Sierra. Keep writing. I won't be surprise if your is mentioned amongst the greatest one day. Congrats!

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John Richter 24 June 2015

Michael Joseph, you are a cad. Please adhere to your mother's rule stating that if you have nothing nice to say then say nothing at all. Or was your mother's voice limited to the howling of a jackal? Because that is what your comment appears to be. Everyone else who comes here, will you please hit the dislike button on Michael's comment and hit the like button on all the positive comments here? Please? This seven year old poet rhymed every one of her couplets.... Oh the insensitive nature of some people just appalls me.

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Gauri Vyas 24 June 2015

really nice and i think you have great sense of writing.keep writing!

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Michael Joseph 24 June 2015

This is the poem of the day? ? ? Really? ! ! How are these chosen? I thought this was a serious poem site Isn't being at least 18 a prerequisite? C'mon PH!

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