Sing In Sunrise. Poem by Fay Slimm

Sing In Sunrise.

Rating: 5.0


Over dim woodland floor dew starts to rise.
Birds feather into cool breeze and take flight,
And dark night, like a thief, steals fast away.
Harmony now needs to lead, tunes it's keys
And sings in another bright day.

Come feel the beginning of dawn with me.
Inhale this new sunrise, and naked we
Will bathe in the fragrance of fresh clean air.
Joining hands we will sign to fate's calling
And let sunrise know we are there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 11 July 2009

Over dim woodland floor dew starts to rise. Birds feather into cool breeze and take flight, ............... nature yet tunes by the breath of breeze stance of glee rises as it fills its need...........excellence of love ripples as when togerthered, heart beacons as when glazed by glow luscious, wonderful write,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Fiona Davidson 11 July 2009

Beautiful imagery as always from your pen Fay...Fi 10+++

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Smiley Hooker 14 July 2009

Oh so heartwarming...sensual and so beautifully crafted! : -)

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Nikunj Sharma 20 July 2009

to let the sunrise you are there is a great way, to let the sun know that you stand in his way that's the life and that's the way for someone that calls himself AGELESS FAY

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Come feel the beginning of dawn with me. Inhale this new sunrise, and naked we beautiful lines and drawing my attention forits presentation... i liked it.. read mine cool breeze..the sun

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Yelena M. 25 July 2009

Oh this is a poem filled with such purity of feelings and freshness of sunrise. Thanks for sharing, Fay. Best wishes. A.

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Meggie Gultiano 25 July 2009

oh yesss. this is great. I love the second stanza very much. Hugs, Meggie

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Bob Gibson 24 July 2009

Standing naked hand in hand, in some exotic land two bodies kissed by the glowing orb warmth and sensuality absorb

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 July 2009

well i d say your poems are great food to start the day... make the reader feel so refreshed.... to look at the sunshine with love.... not many people can do that Fay! ! ! i told you the ones i admire and enjoy most i guess... so your ones are great...thanks 10++ with love shan

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