Sin Has No Place In Pastoral Settings, Love Poems Poem by Captain Cur

Sin Has No Place In Pastoral Settings, Love Poems

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Containing you in words was that my goal?
Sizing you to fit what space I had to give?
Writing each small part of you
did I lose the whole?

Describing your structural elements,
the body of my text
neatly ordered and composed,
effected with a loose style,
stoic; yet, rigidly controlled.

You were to be the idyllic poem,
supple and flexible as speech,
with a rising and falling rhythm all your own.

What is significant is that to each
expanding layer of thought
I press inward for the answers
seeking to contain the true nature
and germ of your flesh.

Sin has no place in pastoral settings.

I sought to have you as my lover
thoroughly enjoyed and then forgotten;
but, I find no great ease in forgetting
all the wonderful lessons,
which you taught me,
how to write and love without the bed.

I ask, then;
'Can the genius and heat of passion
survive solely in the head? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

the pastor isn't gonna be amused.... :) lovely reflective write... The question.. what ails thee? ? ? ...difficult to answer...deep questions with hardly any answer....

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 September 2012

A nice question is being asked at the end of poem. people have different ideas about that question, mine is no. this work is so wise and great well done my captain.

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Harriet James 06 September 2012

A wonderful reflective rhetorical write, thank you Captain

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