Simultaneity Poem by Julia Klimenova

Simultaneity

Rating: 5.0


I’m contemplating
Scratches on my laptop lid,
And the childhood scar on my hand,
And the wrinkles lining my face.

I’m listening to
Trickle from the leaking tap,
And the rain I danced in as a girl,
And the teardrops falling with a thud.

I’m smelling
Withered flowers’ sweet decay,
And the perfume that he used to like,
And the ashes of the letters burnt.

I’m thinking of
Self-sufficiency
And the weather forecast:
Sunshine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

And the perfume that he used to like, And the ashes of the letters burnt. I’m thinking of Self-sufficiency awesome... I can actually picture it :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

fine pictureque! clean composition! 10+

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