Simplicity And Style Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Simplicity And Style

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One, two, three, four
People say life is sour
All they rush to five
Make life simple to live

Then followed six, seven and eight
As you acted honest and right
All they were now near to nine and ten
Looked as row and appeared solid then

If we follow with real sense
There is no reason to be tense
This may be considered as hear say
But certainly it shows the way

I smile internally when there is nothing to laugh
At least the happiness can be shared by half
If we move on do something worthwhile
That can be called simplicity and style

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Surendra Meghwal likes this. Surendra Meghwal waaw.....so beautiful.....maza aaya.... 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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amazing aryan choudharyLess than a minute ago amazing, well-written, wonderful poem and please checkout my poem'out in space'.i hope you will love it. Comment +1 Good Work

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Satyender Yadav1 minute ago Then followed six, seven and eight As you acted honest and right didn't rhyme good, could have been better rest all great. Comment +1 Pretty Good

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Serena Hibbard2 minutes ago Keeping them coming that was pretty good.

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One, two, three, four People say life is sour

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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