Simple Race Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Simple Race
In morning and in evening I pray
Earnestly fall to his feet to show the way
If at all I am doing anything wrong
Virtually with tears and in religious songs
It is the only way to feel guilty
As we are called children of almighty
We are made by him from simple clay
He is the only one to show us with comfortable stay
We are human being and may err
It is neither folly on our part nor error
But a gamble that every individual takes
In quest for obtaining sweet cake
Sin or no sin yet it is great load
Some of the secrets are not to be sold
They are confessed before almighty
With pure heart to regret and feel sorry
He is there with kind heart
To forgive all our sins for new start
We got to assure him of good conduct
This is known to all with simple fact
I shall stay wherever I am
Nothing should bother me or them
He is merciful and our savior
No one is superior or no one is inferior
Let us live as single entity
Prove your worth with nobility
No one takes you for granted
You lead the life as you wanted
Curse or no curse it is your concern
But forget soon when tides turn
Go before him and confess
Life is to be moved on as simple race
LaSoaphia QuXazs Yes, it is good to stay whatever you are. But be sorry what we did has no value, that is the teaching of religions. When God created the world, He called it good, beside he gave us a free will to try out our own short comings. What happens to us, we caused it, but for the reason to learn from it. So, everything is necessary for our own progression. And that can bring happiness, or tragic for us. We have the choice.
a good ovation to the almighty, penned in pouring language. now the need of the hour it increase vegetation stop pollution to save ourselves and our progeny. rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai Jul 10,2012
M P 22 minutes ago I just love the energy of this poem, enough to overlook the obvious grammatical and metrical 'license.' :) But please work on these things - getting them right is a means of adding strength and credibility to your work. Well done, Hasmuk
Barbara Cadogan22 hours ago Great message! Comment 0 AMEN
Excellent Piece yvonne sensing21 hours ago Life is to be moved on as a simple race...beautifully said...great power...excellent poem Comment 0 Well composed
AMEN Joye Atkinson24 minutes ago beautifully expressed Comment +1 VERY GOOD Edward Wilkes26 minutes ago We are just lumps of clay, hopefully allowing ourselves to ever be refined along the way. Comment +1 Excellent! ! !
Edward Wilkes26 minutes ago We are just lumps of clay, hopefully allowing ourselves to ever be refined along the way. Comment +1 Excellent! ! !
Antoinette Townsend31 minutes ago Great poem! ! True words! ! ! Comment +1 Intense and riveting, despite a few grammatical 'glitches.'
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In morning and in evening I pray Earnestly fall to his feet to show the way