Simple Grace Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Simple Grace

Rating: 5.0


I felt as if she is near by and around
Still not seen and could not be found
Touches me gently when I go round
Sweet presence felt when feet placed firmly on ground

Icy winds pierce through in wool
Nice feelings and mind stays very cool
Reminds of her sweet company and presence
As love to me is matter of pride and essence

Nothing detracts me when I sit and think
Eyes stare for moment but not offer a wink
Gradually it shuts down and starts to sink
When come back to sense and freshly rethink

She has made great impact on my mind
Thousands of attempt made but couldn't find
She is not beautiful figure but simple entity
Can be felt but not seen even if she is in near vicinity?

Such is her noble gesture and grace
Sincere try but no where to trace
I am for her but not in the race
But fresh blood rush and visibly seen on face

Is she prevalent in small particles of air?
In distinguished fire, dim light, bright ray or flair
I feel warmth in her fingers when moving in curly hair
Inner soul sometimes cautions me it is not only fair but rare

Why her presence around creates puzzles?
I feel very good in rain when it drizzles
Everywhere she can be felt with little ease
Memory strikes continuously and not even cease

I must acknowledge it with full sincerity
May be it is eternal love with simple continuity?
You may not find her with me in full day light
She is always there with elegance and delight

She may continue to live as long as I am present
It is not necessary to have and seek her consent
I may try my level best to adore and glorify
Change the approach and with ways to modify


She may prefer to stay calm with posture
May make life happy in the future
Always to rescue with feelings to nurture
Nothing to avail but always to offer

Thousands of words in her praise may be less
She is always there to pacify and remove stress
It is here eternal beauty which keeps me at ease
She has all charms for me to attract and release

Women are generally kind and very tolerant
They remain very pleasant with quality inherent
It is their powerful weapon and very essential
To prove its worth with element so substantial

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Severina Dsouza 26 August 2009

Slowly slowly slip and start to sink Come back to sense and freshly rethink....10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 August 2009

you know sir, this one's good. I miss my crush. Her name is natalie abayon.

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Darshna Chopra 27 August 2009

Icy winds pierce through in wool Nice feelings and mind very cool....10

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K.v. Subbarao 27 August 2009

Touches me gently when go round Sweet presence felt when feet placed on ground......10

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Mubeen Sadhika 27 August 2009

Extraordinary poem. Nicely written. Deserves 10+

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Rinki Nandy 23 January 2010

Women are generally kind and very tolerant They remain very pleasant with quality inherent It is their powerful weapon and very essential To prove its worth with element so substantial your words describe us the best. so good to know that in this chauvinist world there exists a man who not only admits but appreciates a woman's beauty, lovely and eternal.10++++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 January 2010

i find the last verse the best but of course the whole is good! nice write!

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Venkat Ramanna 15 October 2009

I feel she is near by and around Still not seen and could not be found Touches me gently when go round

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Sergio Bruno 26 September 2009

Everywhere she can be felt at little ease Memory strikes continuously and not even cease

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

Nothing detracts me when I think Eyes stare for moment and not wink...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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