Silly Poem by Dee Daffodil

Silly

Rating: 5.0


I was feelin' kind of silly
From me head down to me toes
As I couldn't tell the difference
'Tween me elbow and me nose

I had put me socks upon me ears
And me hat upon me bottom
And me shirt was tied around me waist
As for pants...I haven't got em!

I'd put gloves upon me tootsies
One was blue and one was red
But I hadn't found me undies,
Since I'd gotten out of bed

You may ask where I am going,
And if this poem is just a lark
But the moral of this story...
Don't get dressed when it is dark! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 27 September 2006

Love it, just great fun Dee, well done the world needs more lifts like these Love duncan X

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Scarlett Treat 27 September 2006

Dear Daffy Dee Daffodil: This daffy poem was such fun to read that I immediately sent it to meself, and all me grandchildren to read! It has a very Dr. Seuss feel to it, and it was great! Write more like this one! ! Scarlett

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 September 2006

Quite an amusing piece, DEE...Wit and Cleverity abound, as well as solid structure, and smooth flowing rhythm.....Fine job''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ernestine Northover 27 September 2006

So hilarious, So brilliant. So very well constructed indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Well, well done. I'm still laughing. Cheers. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alison Cassidy 30 September 2006

Dee, the title hooked me. I love the word silly and your poem measures up delightfully to the promise of the title. I agree with Scarlett, very 'Cat in the Hat', and well written to boot. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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So....Does that mean I have to stay naked? Or wear bed clothes? Think I need a lie down.......... Ez

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Chuck Audette 17 October 2006

Superb writing, bringing a well-needed smile to every person who reads this. Thank you, Dee! 10! -chuck

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Francesca Johnson 05 October 2006

Sounds like something me old friend Kate would tell. I really enjoyed the fun of this one, Dee, me duck. Love, Fran xxx

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Brian Dorn 05 October 2006

Great poem, Dee... silly, but clever as well. One of the all-time cute poems in my book! ! Brian

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 04 October 2006

What a joyous wonderful write! A 10!

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