Silent Tears Poem by jason mcgookin

Silent Tears

Rating: 3.6


.I lay awake, alone with my fears
trying to stop my flow of tears.
Waiting for that familiar noice.
of footsteps and the whispering voice.
I close my eyes, still, i remain.
Im now in his darkened domain.
I feel his breath apon my cheek.
for its his lust he wants to seek.
He lays his hand apon my breasts.
Then continues to touch and caress.
He climbs on top to do his worst.
My tears inside about to burst.
but still my tears i keep.
inside my soul begins to weep.
i feel his poison injected inside.
im now an emmotional tide.
you leave me now, more alone.
my heart and mind youve turned to stone.
days become weeks then months and years.
every day i cry my silent tears. ”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharon Herzog 19 February 2011

Wowed again, very expressive, sad but powerful writing.

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aRE YOU SURE YOU JUST STARTED WRITING? yOUR STUFF IS DEEP. iT IS SO RELATABLE AND I CAN'T HELP BUT FALL IN LOVE WITH IT. YOU ARE GREAT! ! ! !

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Rosalita Fernandez 28 June 2009

so sad because its true, brilliant poem, good choice of words,

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Sharon-Ann Dawson 11 June 2009

Very expressive, evoking emotion is not always easy. very well written.

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I'm awe-struck by the sadness. I have no words.

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