Silent Suffocation Poem by Savannah marie

Silent Suffocation

Rating: 5.0


Death by heartbreak.
Pain by separation.
Nothing to fill the ache.
To live is a hesitation.
The world you know is fake.
And your left without preparation.
You turn inward for your own sake.
In desperate need for an explanation.
Hopeing its all a dream and you can just awake.
Wishing it could end in silent suffocation.
Death is in reach for you to take.
Darkness has started its infestation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 15 October 2011

Amazing! A powerful write full a great imagery and fine texture along with a smooth flow and rhymes! 10+++ Well deserved! Your poetic talent is so clearly shown through this fantastic poem! Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Crimson Love 03 October 2011

Truly a magnificent poem, ' Death has started it infestation' Your lines and words were well chosen, I enjoyed it quite a bit. :)

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