Silent Pain Poem by Vishal Sharma

Silent Pain

Rating: 4.5


though I am not
before your eyes
my heart is always
there.
It hankers for just one look
but O my dear life
remember this rhyme
strongest is the time
we are just its slaves
we do,
what we are are ordered to do
our time is gone
never would be our love
we hence take the promise
our love will shine for forever
brighter than the sun
as calm as the moon
as pure as the dove
that is our love...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 30 March 2013

A short write and too short for sweet write, but it has bitter a bit, still nice to feel_Soul

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2013

Lovely write with such wise lines, I really enjoyed it!

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Stefan Alexandru Ciobanu 28 March 2013

end is weak. especially the last verse.

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