Ali Sabry

Rookie - 139 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

- - 'silent Became My Walking Shadow'- - - Poem by Ali Sabry

Silent became my walking shadow

The action indicated me mind narrow

The game between us concluded as a draw

I feel 13 i can't even believe i grow

Visited life with you was tasty

Visiting your profile was nasty

Unforgettable mistake made your life dusty


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'Silent Became My Walking Shadow'

Comments about - - 'silent Became My Walking Shadow'- - by Ali Sabry

  • Gold Star - 7,718 Points Kelly Kurt (4/1/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    There is no pain quite like that of love lost. You write about it well.
    I wish you peace, Ali (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,512 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (5/20/2014 4:00:00 PM)

    Hello poet Ali. I visited your poems and read your bio. I enjoyed and want to encourage you to keep writing. Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asiimwe Simon (12/4/2013 3:12:00 AM)

    Few words with sweet taste, deep feelings in my heart they rest! this is a wonderful poem my friend, may your hand live to be blessed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points izuchukwu Lucius (11/24/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    I love this poem sorry for the delay (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013


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