Silent Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Silent

Rating: 4.5


Now I am silent,
Because I think,
I am all spent.

You hear me not,
Because I think,
I am distraught.

The queer drama,
The weird clowns,
Put me in a trauma.

The silence of grave,
Descending slowly,
On a nation so brave!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dhaka
17 December 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 December 2013

recent act your nation created such a silence you broke the silence putting a candle....beautiful brother 10

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Thank you so much Aftab, so well said!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 02 January 2014

Silence is wonderful for our attitude.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 January 2015

@Amitava Sur, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your kind thoughts here. I agree to your remarks. Certainly I shall read your poem too.

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Sky Welch 24 March 2014

Oh how inspiring. My Fiance might like this poem. It reminds me of Wicca in a way.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

Dear Sky Welch, I hope your fiance will find some time to read this poem and leave a comment, as you did. Thank you for the comment.

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Amitava Sur 15 February 2014

Yes it's better to remain silent in the undone situation. But definitely those weird clowns can not remain long.... nice penning You may read my poem Killing myself.

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Carol Fleming Klein 24 January 2014

I enjoy the imagery captured in the brevity of your words, particularly in this poem. I don't pretend to understand all the references in your imagery, but they lead one inevitably a heartbeat at a time into your final image.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here, @Carol Fleming Klein. Much obliged.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 January 2014

@Valsa George, Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem.

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