Silences Poem by Rani Turton

Silences

Rating: 5.0


I didn't know how to reply
When you said, You are more to me
Than all this;
I don't know why
My first thought was to lie
But do you know
I just wanted to lay down my head and cry.

The sun slanted through the windowpane
I looked at those hands sensitive and fine
I looked at everything
Pictures on the wall
So that the words wouldn't touch me at all

There are silences as thick as glassdoors
Transparent but solid
But when broken, can cause immense pain
So at four in the afternoon that day
I simply went away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ann Beard 31 March 2008

Quite lovely Rani. I really enjoyed this poem. Ann

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Sandra Fowler 29 March 2008

Sometimes silence is more articulate than any words that could or should be said aloud. Very compelling. Warm regards, Sandra

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Coreena Dejesus 27 March 2008

I can feel your emotions! Simply lovely! Thanks for sharing. Keep inking them! Hugs Coreena

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Flora Gillingham 24 March 2008

I like the metaphor of the glass door - works very well. F

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Anjali Mandokhot 17 March 2008

its so very impressive...and so strongly puts the point abou silence simply loved it wishes anjali

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