Silence At Daybreak Poem by swetha vankayalapati

Silence At Daybreak

Rating: 4.8


In darks, in prolific sands with sprinkles of rain,
Springs up a greening deed, the seed with a grin!

Teeny it learns of its teeming plants, is a part
Of plant, a silent kingdom; rivers visit
Pour waters to its stems to grow green;
Its painted in colours with sunlights strewn,
It plans climates and drives them in time;
Healthy it is to lead a team called forests
For guests ‘animals' to arrest in caress.

Seed with a grin, sighs rejoicing!
Prays for dawn to break in! !

Teeny it learns of its teeming plants, outsiders
Search sweet aroma for food, so stand that side;
To erect in heights strong to direct rough winds,
to blow soft breezes in widths;
To grow in lengths, wood for home,
flute for music, all for kids;
if its unique, its cut down to bonsai art,
carried out to musuems, for all folks;

Seed with a grin, looks in..
For dawn in no mean! !

Teeny it learns of its teeming plants, latex
Of it is as rubber in use, fibre of it use in textile;
To shine in daylights; enlighten a soul out of daydreams,
To dance in seasons with clinging flowers for pollens!
These positive notes energise medicine origins.
Roars of factories use electricity of coal,
From ur burrial sands, after many years long;
Further turn to crude petrol, for road vechiles' roll.

Seed with a grin, learns this grim!
In short, dawn breaks, seed breaks down! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 06 June 2012

Wow sheer beauty...Amazing poem....Great work

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Vincent Kuo 07 June 2012

Wow, a vivid poem employing a profound philosophy about human society! Do you mean for us to choose between modern technology and the natural splendour of mother nature? Is there no way of having the best of both worlds for mankind?

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wow i really love the alternation spirit of each words along the lines, the wonderful tactical structure of poetry that bares nothing but some true and profound reflection of the real society in our daily lives, great my friend The_African_Son

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Danny Draper 07 June 2012

This is interesting, the environmental message and the use of repetition, reinforcing and developing the theme to the strength of the last 2 lines which were powerful.

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June Walker 08 June 2012

A very interesting poem with lovely feeling for the greenery around us. Very unusual use of language which is good to find.. And I love the phrase 'silent kingdom'.

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Aditya Keerthi 23 August 2013

The tender warmth of growth radiates, its grin spreading life across. Caught in the caresses of finesse, it blooms full and rosy, standing up to mighty height of beauty: -D

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Unwritten Soul 20 July 2012

This poem created with the lines of gold, shining and, meaningful....U plant it well to green in poem hunter forest with words shady the readers' smile_Unwritten Soul

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 July 2012

i'm commentless. Lol. The words, the flow, resonances and style- it's just splendid

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Vijay Sai R 20 June 2012

your poem deserves to gain silent appreciations

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Tsunami Hs 16 June 2012

This is a beautiful poem with a great message. I love your vocabulary and the way your words flow together

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