Silence Poem by Sathya Narayana

Silence

Rating: 5.0


(This was rather my first poem)


You kept a long silence
I too maintained the same sense!

What an impasse...
incising two loving hearts!

Our next meeting may be really exciting!
But alas, waiting is excruciating!

Wednesday, April 23, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,love,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 23 August 2009

Very concise and well said - silence is a powerful thing Ruthy

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Raj Nandy 13 February 2009

Yes, at times this silence becomes more eloquent than words! I had read somewhere - the mighty Himalayas stood thundering in its silence! -Raj Nandy

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Ben Gieske 17 November 2008

You say a lot with a few words with this one. What is noticeable here are all the words with s sounds.

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ngaio beck 01 May 2008

You have an excellent ability to evoke a myriad of feeling in a short verse.I wonder if you, (like me) , have English as a second language. Ngaio Beck

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Trinity K 26 April 2008

in silence lava flows in silence cosmos runs in silence we live we die in cresendo! ! ! ! ! !

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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