Silence Poem by Kim McInnis

Silence



Silence
Peaceful, Tranquil
Sleeping, Dreaming, Thinking
Night, Dark, Fear, Distress
Crying, Falling, Craving
Painful, Frustrated
Screaming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sejal Pachisia 06 September 2006

i actually thought this was brilliant.. i luv the contrast as well as the structure.. i think it says a lot.

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Matthew Hyatt 26 March 2005

Your poem carries a very flat note here. Your poem doesn't seem to be one of your best. Sorry.

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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