Shut Out Poem by Shreya Jani

Shut Out

Rating: 5.0


Life knocked at my door
But there was a lock on it
A lack of imagination prevented windows
Alack of faith stopped ventilation
I lay on my bed waiting still
Beyond the door there may be fields
Perhaps a river or two
There maybe waterfalls and rainbow
But on the bed I lay waiting
My tears became the waterfall
My Knees fold up mountains
My breath became the wind
My hair the fields I longed
Life came and I forgot to open the door!
I lay in the bed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

Beyond the door there may be fields Perhaps a river or two There maybe waterfalls and rainbow life came and i forgot to open the door.......... a powerful sentence which makes the reader think and flow into wild imagination....... but life will come again and then please open the door......... thank you. tony

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Utsav Patel 09 April 2013

Its nice... Its indeed deep...

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