Shut Doors Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Shut Doors

Rating: 2.6


Shut doors

Doors shut on the face
By the force of destiny
Leave trepidations tiny

The precept of the appearance
The glaze of the mahogany
Has much to do with mutual disharmony

The persistence of spirits
That tireless knocks on shut door
Leaves impatient brunt feelings on soar

Yet; precept apart
Life is tart
Yet if all games left apart

Realities on doors knock
Has to the perceptive little shock
Let us with cool smile, tactful elegance unlock!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 06 June 2009

A thoughtful write indeed Realities on doors knock Has to the perceptive little shock Let us with cool smile, tactful elegance unlock! I like the tactful elegance unlock as it gives it a sort of light at the end of the tunnel sort of feel to the poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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Rosalinda Martinez 24 May 2009

I like that cool smile. Continue with your self expressions... thanks

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Lalitha iyer 24 February 2009

Dear Malini, so still the doors are shut.

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