Shri Krishna Sharnam Mama: Poem by Cherry Sha

Shri Krishna Sharnam Mama:

Rating: 5.0


Hues of sunup are beautiful and light
You blow your flute; they find peace and recline..
They see you in heart with closed psyche & eyes
On the earth of their heart, you dance play and smile…
Yellow attire, lotus in hand, the scene is fragile
with darshan of this leela they get withdrawn of their lives
you come out of yamuna and move on for a joy ride
as the music discontinues…they open their eyes
Realizing you are gone… out of sadness they cry
Helpless of what happened they have to wait for a long while
In the evening they have, their share of delight
Coz then...
With cows…….Kanha returns…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 02 March 2009

Very effective penning about the restless dwellers of Gokul....there devotion and love for Krishna. you have brought out the feeling in its depth....nothing in their daily life entertains them as much as his darshan! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! well done Cherry All the best! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Neha Aradhye 02 March 2009

so nice...seems ur a devotee of Lord Krishna..

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Jammy Ran 10 March 2012

antar kya dono ki drishti mein bolo.. ek prem divani..ek darash divani.. nice work cherry..

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Kee Thampi 21 August 2009

you come out of yamuna and move on for a joy ride as the music discontinues…they open their eyes Realizing you are gone… out of sadness they cry Helpless of what happened they have to wait for a long while In the evening they have, their share of delight nice to keep krishna in my heart

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Vinod Ak 11 July 2009

splendid devotional expression! ! ! 10++++

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Shekhar Joshi 09 March 2009

another mira in the making good work

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C. P. Sharma 02 March 2009

Cherry, you put your heart into it. A very good attempt. Keep it up. CP

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