Should I Be Loyal? Poem by Queeny Gona

Should I Be Loyal?

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You should be loyal
Said my mama; always!

I should be loyal
Resolved me; as God commanded!

Should I be loyal?
Thought I; being accused!

Why should I be loyal?
Questioned my soul; after all betrayal!

You shouldn't be disloyal
Appealed my sibling!

None may count it:
Yet God rewards it!

Time for you and me,
To Introspect!

Pour out our hearts,
To the LORD Almighty!

Cry unto LORD aloud,
For deliverance!

Lend our ears,
To his call

Share the good news,
With every one!

Free you received, Free you give!

Thus being thankful,
To the Holly God!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 15 October 2013

Beautifully penned verse, so true as it holds a deep understanding on what level a loyalty can hold.

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Valsa George 05 November 2013

Values are taught by a great mother and is advised by your sibling to stick on to them and your mind resolved to make no compromise to your loyalty to God and men! Free you recieved and free you give...! . Even the values we recieved, we are supposed to share with others! I am inspired by your conviction! Sweet write! !

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Dinesan Madathil 18 October 2013

Conditioning of life is dependent on situations which vary from time to time. But ever and ever one has to be loyal and so you too have to be...

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2013

very nice.written in a nice style it gives a message.liked it.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 17 October 2013

a good heart is seen in the poem

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Heather Wilkins 16 October 2013

a good write Queeny. loyalty is completely up to the individual. lovely thoughts

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