Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,262 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Should I Accept Or Not? - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

I just smiled at the poor little girl dressed in torn rags
with cute pony tail dancing behind.
She smilingly came in front of me.
Two little groundnuts held in her tiny fists
When opened it was wet with sweat of love.
She offered me with her twinkling eyes.

So innocent she was
She didn't give a second thought before offering.

She put me in dilemma should I accept or not?
Just forget the hygiene.
I am not asking to have it.
Should I break her heart by refusing it?
But if I take
How much delighted will she feel
That no words can describe her love in giving though a small one!
By refusing it I make her realise what she is!
Is it right to think, how come a beggar,
Who cannot stand on her feet is giving me?
Should I tell, first stand in your feet then think of it.
Or by accepting it am I degraded?

If she gives you her alms with love will you accept it?

A person standing in a pit or in a pool of tears too
can add something valuable to you life!
Don't underestimate others love and care.
Remember, a person in pain too can offer you a lending hand.
Some love are unconditional
After loosing it, you will realise due to your own false pride you have lost!

Life is short.
Accept the alms with love if the hands too are giving with love.


Comments about Should I Accept Or Not? by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 1:46:00 PM)

    .the internal struggle and dilemma makes the poem beautiful and enhances its flow..........lovely write.......
    I invite you to read my poem- .never look like one (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,192 Points Anil Kumar Panda (2/27/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    Innocent love should not be ignored at any cost.One is fortunate to get it free now a days.Beautiful drop. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 811 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (2/27/2014 3:36:00 AM)

    A very fine situational poem trickling from the sense of confusion. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,125 Points Amitava Sur (2/25/2014 8:50:00 PM)

    I would love to have that soiled sweat soaked nut, that is nothing but a blessing in deed, from an innocent child shaped angel in deed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,503 Points Lyn Paul (2/25/2014 6:38:00 PM)

    Very beautiful. I was there ready to accept the groundnuts this would have made my day as well as this little one with a giant heart. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,718 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/24/2014 10:31:00 AM)

    Like love forbids her forgives and forgets all hurdles on the way........Geetha......It's humanity and
    God can be sensed in innnocent hands..............great write........ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (2/24/2014 2:40:00 AM)

    If she gives you her alms with love will you accept it?

    the gutsy poet speaks the question in many minds. nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (2/24/2014 1:52:00 AM)

    When offered with love, it is always kind on our part to accept.... But we have to be careful about the context, the time and the person who is offering... In this case, there is nothing to be suspected as the child shows an innocent gesture of simple love. As you feel.. the cleanliness is the only thing that can raise a little concern. But it is upto us whether we should eat it or not, even if accepted! A very touching write... such gesture of love coming from people who are in many way deprived has greater magnificence than a costly gift offered by the rich! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,930 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/23/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    If there is no malicious undercurrent, I feel, it is always best to accept the offer. In this poem the child is love, simplicity and innocence personified. A brilliant poem which touches the string of the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (2/23/2014 4:37:00 AM)

    At what cost is a gift of love freely given? A very thoughtful write Geetha. The image lingers. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/23/2014 3:56:00 AM)

    Thought process nicely explained. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (2/23/2014 12:44:00 AM)

    When life itself is a give and take affair in its real logic, we have to take whatever is offered provided it is done with heart and not by hands alone. A poem that can be much more interpreted. Well written Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 97,767 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/22/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    if the hands too are giving with love... nice feeling

    accept love
    and believe
    luck is pendilum
    it may come any time (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,141 Points Hans Vr (2/22/2014 9:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful thoughts, Geetha. We can indeed learn a lot from someone giving.
    I truly enjoyed reading this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 22, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 22, 2014

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