Shot Poem by Iris Blue

Shot

Rating: 5.0


A mute of white swans
raft into dawn's blush
behind the blind's
hidden stare,
unaware
of the camouflaged intentions
of the wildfowler's shot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Unaware! ! Nice work.

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Joshua Fegley 06 January 2013

Sucks to be the bird. Interesting poem.

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