Shining On You Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Shining On You

Rating: 5.0


True love!
With the bright and morning star;
Shining on you.

Discussion,
Contributing,
Exhorting one another is better than the lips of war!

True love,
The future looks bright!
Accepting the laws and doing what is right.

Honey and butter!
Sensational with the muse of love;
With the bright and morning star shining on you.

Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2020

True love is the key! ! ! Able to share and care for each other. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Roseann Shawiak 12 September 2014

Exhorting one another is better is better than the lips of war! Very poignant statement, Edward. True love does contribute to accepting laws and doing what is right - when in love everything seems to fall into place and feel right. Excellent poem, I like it very much. I give you a 10. Thank you also for reading and commenting on my poem: Maturing Time, I really appreciate it. RoseAnn

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