Shell On The Shelf Near My Bed Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

Shell On The Shelf Near My Bed

Rating: 4.8


Shell on the shelf near my bed
Take me back to memories box
Last summer on Virgin Island beach
Alone fighting words creating poem
She walks near me without sound
Holding shell in her hands
She comes forward to me
Look at me and smile
Long black hair like water fall
Beauty of Virgin Island
She put the shell on my ear
Sound of waves touching my soul
Hold her hand and start walking
Hand on hand, banded shadows
We walk long way
Ah memories
On other side of bed she lays beside me
Body on body, banded souls
Shell on the shelf near my bed
Take me back to memories box
Last summer on Virgin Island beach

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very excellent, loved it, beautiful way of writing and dreamy images..

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 May 2009

A beautiful romantic Write...........evokes nostalgic feelings..........

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Lee Crowell 01 May 2009

what is it about the beach that brings us romance? you nailed it down quite nicely Mohammed, thanks for this I gave you a nine because you need to work on your basic grammar and spelling

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Eyan Desir 28 April 2009

Well, this was Well written poet Good job

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