Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 258 Points (Kolkata, India)

She Walked - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

She walked in the midnight hours
With some fond memories.
Her road ahead was unknown
As changes had begun!
Life took a sharp unforeseen turn
As intimacy crumbled,
And sensuous rain came to a standstill.
The heart shuffled its colours
From dazzling light to pitch darkness!
She took her stride...
With a dry flower in hand
From the native graveyard,
Longing furthermore
With her deepest will
For gaining strength
To step into a new world,
Thus pursuing the blurred mirage
Of lost paradise...

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Comments about She Walked by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (9/5/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    She should have walked with cautious steps and the distance covered already is quite long!
    The last phase may be with little suffering we hope.
    What is great about this poem is Indrani Bhaduri`s precise and meticulous rendering of the thoughts into a short and meaningful write of the kind. The diction has been apt and meaningful. (Report) Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 2:51:00 PM)

    we must all move on into tomorrow a great strong write (Report) Reply

  • Jesus James Llorico Jesus James Llorico (8/23/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    A poem of strength, this is life, that change has to take place in order for
    us to grow, A remarkable poem indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl Beach Girl (8/19/2013 4:10:00 PM)

    I gave this a 10. Excellent poem of the strength it takes to step into a 'new world' after the passing of a mate. Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Survi Sharma (8/18/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    nice poem
    i liked every word knitted here (Report) Reply

  • Divya Gupta (8/17/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    nyc a sad flows well.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (8/16/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Not everything is lost! Hope lingers! The gates of paradise can open anytime! Though the poem started on a melancholic tone, the positive note at the close is relieving! Greatly enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dimitri Jagodinski (8/14/2013 5:16:00 PM)

    Very nice poem sad but nice tone. Liked the flow and feel while reading. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (8/14/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    A sad story is vividly narrated in beautiful images enhancing the theme of lost love and grief. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (8/14/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    Paradise was lost but then it was regained. Sometimes we find
    ourselves plunged in the valley of despair. Sooner or later we
    see the light at the end of the tunnel and dig ourselves out.
    Please read my poem Valley of Despair. Loved this one. (Report) Reply

  • Jaya Varma (8/13/2013 11:39:00 PM)

    : (pain depicted so nicely.... (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/13/2013 3:48:00 PM)

    Take a deep breath and step into a new world. Nicely expressed to dispel despair. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (8/13/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    Love lost makes a great vacuum and then it gets filled with a poem of the kind. Wonderful write Mr Bhaduri... (Report) Reply

  • Silvi Tripathy (8/13/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    Awesome! ! ! ! sir I loved reading it.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Arabella Picken Arabella Picken (8/13/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    This is very good.
    Nice read (Report) Reply

  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/13/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    agree with Aswath...
    and i love the imagery too
    thanks for sharing
    i invite you read mine (Report) Reply

  • Rumi Roy (8/13/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    A woman with a broken heart ready to make a new start, hardships come, darkness prevails, she moves along with strength...lovely penning. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan Poetheart Morgan (8/13/2013 7:59:00 AM)

    Full of meanings Poet. She can walks on this world or in another. She can be the first or the last. Anyway, good to think, Very well penned! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    I had to read this a couple of times and I still wonder whether there is a multitude of meaning in it. A shade of melancholy increases the richness of this write. Good one sir (Report) Reply

  • Robinson Robinson (8/13/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    Paradise from the Greek word paradiesos meaning royal (enclosed) park.
    Paradise the place where Adam and Eve were expelled from.
    Was this poem about an Eve? Love exists in the heart, has she been expelled from someone's heart.
    In ancient Greece love existed in the liver, '' quiver my liver. ''
    Let me stop now or I will bore you forever. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 13, 2013

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