She Sang To The Sea Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

She Sang To The Sea

Rating: 4.5


SHE SANG TO THE SEA


In olden times, long before,
A girl ran along the shore,
And sang to the sea a song…

But no one could see
How wondrous were
The songs of the sea.

It made the little girl
Laugh heartily,
She burst into laughter
At that shore…

And the boundless,
The deep blue sea
With laughter
Started to roar…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 26 October 2010

Nostalgic but the the soul of the sea and the girl....perhaps the same one as reflected through the writing. Yet they had tied each other with two different identities. Good poem. Lucid but a clean philosophy peeps through its simplicity. A question yet haunts....what does the little girl do now...does she yet laugh with sea's laughter...does she yet sing with the same tune.... Or now she writes poem now! ! ! 10/10 Regards, pranab

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Alison Cassidy 11 April 2008

There's a real e e cummings feel to this Tsira - a sort of musical naivity which is most appealing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Roland Bastien 08 April 2008

A girl ran along the shore, And sang to the sea a song --------------- the song goes deeper into the sea heart and awakes a little fish. The girl falls in love with a fish and goes every day there to meet him. one day a sailor kills the fish and offers him to the girl. the girl sang the same song seated on a pew, holding the fish. both travelled into the earth's womb.

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Broken Peaces 06 April 2008

You sing a song with your words 10 Chris

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