Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 6,809 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

She Left Me....... [A Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short]


With my fondest thoughts of life I'll always link her.
She leaves me with my future, alone, to tinker.
My Love up and left! ......... That little stinker.

(Feb.2013)

Submitted: Sunday, February 10, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

i don't recall what prompted me to write this. the subject of the poem i mean. i think i was trying to write a short poem. i succeeded. june 29...i just noticed that i submitted this poem twice, but with different 'stories'. oh well.

Comments about this poem (She Left Me....... [A Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short] by Bri Edwards )

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (2/19/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    Succinct is good, just like this poem, poetic thoughts should be recorded regardless of the source of the inspiration. Short but sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (2/14/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Well go ahead with your future which is precious. I like the poem.Kindly read my poems and comment (Report) Reply

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