She Left Me....... [a Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

She Left Me....... [a Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short]

Rating: 4.0


With my fondest thoughts of life I'll always link her.
She leaves me with my future, alone, to tinker.
My Love up and left! ......... That little stinker.

(Feb.2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i don't recall what prompted me to write this. the subject of the poem i mean. i think i was trying to write a short poem. i succeeded. june 29...i just noticed that i submitted this poem twice, but with different 'stories'. oh well.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 March 2020

A short poem that speaks volumes. Also, the wording and the rhyme are delightful. Great poem!

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Danny Draper 19 February 2013

Succinct is good, just like this poem, poetic thoughts should be recorded regardless of the source of the inspiration. Short but sweet.

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Babatunde Aremu 14 February 2013

Nice poem. Well go ahead with your future which is precious. I like the poem.Kindly read my poems and comment

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