Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 7,698 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

She Left Me....... [a Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short] - Poem by Bri Edwards

With my fondest thoughts of life I'll always link her.
She leaves me with my future, alone, to tinker.
My Love up and left! ......... That little stinker.

(Feb.2013)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i don't recall what prompted me to write this. the subject of the poem i mean. i think i was trying to write a short poem. i succeeded. june 29...i just noticed that i submitted this poem twice, but with different 'stories'. oh well.

Comments about She Left Me....... [a Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short] by Bri Edwards

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (2/19/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    Succinct is good, just like this poem, poetic thoughts should be recorded regardless of the source of the inspiration. Short but sweet. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (2/14/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Well go ahead with your future which is precious. I like the poem.Kindly read my poems and comment (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013


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