She Knows Now Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

She Knows Now

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I peep through
To feel true
But she does not let
Or open the gate

I look through window
And allow
My self through thoughts
But I am caught

She knows from where can I intrude?
Look through fancy image with semi nude
Oh no, she may be offended soon
Fire me with face so frown

I feel hurt when she is away
Signing early and finding way
It is her seclusion
To avoid confusion

I shall follow no where
But look thorough eyes for sure
They shall reveal me in private
All true feelings and state

So I am near
And call her dear
She may respond to
To make me friend true

Saturday, August 23, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

Yes it is rebirth After old death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

She knows now Kristin Commins3 minutes ago its OK but it doesn't read very smoothly

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

It's OK Mrinmoy Choudhury8 hours ago I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

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Mohammad Skati 23 August 2014

It depicts the poet's personal situation.

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Soumita Sarkar 23 August 2014

I loved it...a sit predicts the unprecedented in an eagerness........... to be connected...to be loved.....Good!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

I liked it Eli Damron6 minutes ago Good job Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

It's okay L0u15 M1n3tt3 minutes ago sure. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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