She Is A Woman.. Poem by Ging Taping

She Is A Woman..

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Don't hold her tight
For she will explode..
Not too loose
For she will fly..
Love her gently
And she will love you back
I conclude...

Her tears are shallow
She cries watching
mellow-
dramas,
Can't hold her tears
reading touching stories...
Ask her 'why are you crying? '
She will say 'nothing'
They don't know
She heaves the emotion from an empty hole..

She is compassionate
She offers her shoulder to cry on
Her open arms as comfort zone
Everything's gonna be alright -her line-
Pretending she is strong
But deep inside
She cries, she moans..

She is Prim and Proper..
She makes sure everything is in order..
But don't mess up w/her file and disorder
Gather all of your faults -
she remembers
Anger bursts like a shattered volts.


She is loving and caring
And she takes nothing-
in return.
She bumps
sometimes a dumb...
She is strong
But she is vulnerable
weak and fragile..
She needs a MAN who stands by her.
To love her...
To laugh with, to talk with...
Who believes in her will
Her source of strength..
Her behalf..

Monday, October 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2015

She needs a MAN who stands by her. To love her... To laugh with, to talk with... Who believes in her will Her source of strength.. Her behalf.. that is the truth, behind all the facades and masks a woman puts on she needs a man to complete her on whom she can lean on. that is the truth. you have written it well. thank you

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Ging Taping 30 August 2015

Thank you Sir, if you have time again I would suggest my other poem to read He is a Man .

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Aranthabailu Ummar 21 July 2015

Yes it's the story. After married we learned that to understand each other. It is not only she but he also need a woman. And also it is correct she tries to be strong but inside something else. To be alert tears will timely on. Thanks to made me to go back

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Ging Taping 30 August 2015

Thanks Ma'am...even after marriage..women should balance her time.. For her family, friends and time for herself..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 September 2016

a wife must fit all u say. then he is fortunate

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Kyvin Nash 16 November 2018

Hi Ging This is a perfect description of a woman, I love the 1st Stanza, and last line there I conclude brings the picture of a women giving a man a tip how to love a woman and the 4th Stanza is more of a warning. Gather all your faults.. She remembers.. +10

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2017

maybe you mean mellow-dramas = dramas which are mellow, but i'd use melodramas; i checked the spelling. :) i don't know why it is spelled that way. i wish this were shorter so i 'could' use it in my/our June showcase. i really like it. i'd offer my man-strength, but i'm married : (. behalf.............maybe you are referring to one's better half? ? bet·ter half noun informal noun: better half; plural noun: better halves a person's wife, husband, or partner. bri :) to MyPoemList if it is not yet there.

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Bri Edwards 27 April 2017

SO MANY COMMENTS! i don't know if i have one among them. overall, i like it. so, it is now very clear to all why living with a woman, whether one is another woman or a man, can be tough on both! i should know: 4 wives! at least they were ONE AT A TIME! men, OF COURSE, are perfect beings and will bother no one. ha ha. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 22 March 2017

A beautiful poem in that a woman is defining a woman, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day, congrats.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 March 2017

Beautiful poem. You have depicted a beautiful picture of woman. Congrats on member poem of the day.

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