She Poem by Kezia Kezia
She
She has a life like a candle
burning like a candle without thread
without flame
just melting
no light and heat
simply losing her being
Heartfelt poem, your poems are straight from heart and it reaches heart....Superb 5 *
A touching poem, I recollect Lakdi jal koyela bhai koyela jal bhai rakh, MaiN dukhiya aysi jali koyela bhai nah rakh.
May be it reflects the condition of a particular woman or women in general. It is emphatic enough to draw attention of the reader to the plight of the protagonist. There is pain and sadness and a bleeding heart finding expression through the poem. Thanks a lot for sharing.
Sir you have given a appropriate illustration of this poem. thanks for comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:08:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
no light and heat, but losing being. good one
thanks for comment and liking