Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 159 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Shayan And The Old Man


Let me tell you a story so far
about the past of this universe in a tar

while the skylarks fell for love,
and when the fire burnt the doves,

a hero rose named 'Shayan'
a brave heart who always can

with a blade as the justice fist,
trying hard to kill the beasts

he was sent to do this task,
without any hiding thing as a mask


hope to see these heroes in the today world

Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, November 25, 2013
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Dedicated to my friend, Shayan Shakoori.

Comments about this poem (Shayan And The Old Man by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Rookie - 353 Points Sina Farajzadeh (12/17/2013 4:16:00 AM)

    Why should a hero come and save the world with blade? Those hero-looking guys are just in tales. There is no justice in the world. Everybody can reach this point of view with just a little thinking... There is no need for it. We are condemned to be and to suffer. See Ya (Report) Reply

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