Shattered Like Falling Glass Poem by Paula Glynn

Shattered Like Falling Glass



You wait a lifetime,
Waiting for happiness,
Searching for your true self,
So you don't need anybody else,
Only to find your dreams,
Shattering like a fallen beer bottle.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
J. Paiva 17 December 2009

beer bottle - you should elaborate why you chose to emphasize a beer bottle and not a usual mirror or glass like Dinesh mentioned, other lines are smooth and casually written - i just find that beer bottle depicts on the mood..

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Dinesh Mukherji 17 December 2009

why beer bottle? shattering glasses/mirrors, images.......... Ofcourse, you like it. Have a good day.

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Paula Glynn

Paula Glynn

Essex, Britain
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