Sharing Nature's Plan Poem by CAROL HUGHES

Sharing Nature's Plan

Rating: 5.0


Love and romance
If you have one
You share the other
Add music and dance
Rhythmic gliding feet
Swaying inviting hips
Our eyes radiating warmth
Stirring instant passion
You float on a cloud
No barriers exist
I want you now
We must close the
Gap between us
You want me
I can see it
In your eyes
Your arms long
To embrace me
Pull me near
Take me down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 March 2009

Passionate poem.........After achieving union in soul seeking to achieve union body itself..........Good Write...........10+++

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 November 2008

it's better if we listen to Tango, Salsa or Waltz when we read this sensuos piece. very intimate! keep writing!

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

A wonderfully sensual poem. Has all the elements for a night of magic. cool write; -)

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James B. Earley 22 July 2008

Sounds like sharing Carol's plan! Quite a note of eroticism here....I think. Excellent composition.

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Bill Thomas 22 July 2008

Nice one, Carol, tightly crafted, beautifully rhythmic, & sensuous too! (Love the 'close the / gap' jump) Makes me want to find my Significant Other & dance with her all night long..

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CAROL HUGHES

CAROL HUGHES

NEW YORK CITY, N.Y.
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