Shadows Of Angels Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Shadows Of Angels

Rating: 2.0


I know I didn't earn my place
Walking on the shadows of angels
Where no one sees the falling tears
The sorrow on my face
I'm filled with this disgrace
All alone walking down a road
Where no one cares to go
The only presence being misery
Is this what I was meant to be?
Overshadowed by the ones
Who advertise their deeds?
While I just quietly
Collect dust in the corner?
No!
The fire in my eyes glow brighter
I don't deserve this pain
I want to be seen!
But it burns out as quickly as it appeared
Because no matter what I do
There's never any pleasing you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fox Nekitsune 25 November 2013

I enjoyed this one though it seems a little short on clean, perhaps you could revisit this one and go back over it there are a few places where the structure could be improved upon and considering some of your other poems I think you can really make this one great.

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