Shades Of Love Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Shades Of Love

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She lays awake
all night
fighting memories
good and bad.

Pain breaking dawn
cut and injures
with the light.

Her plight is
always sadness,
a price she
has to pay,

for good love...
bad love...
sad and never had love,
she loses either way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabella Picken 01 August 2013

Simple but a nice poem

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Sally 25 September 2022

Thankyou, Arabella. for your kind remark x

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Lucifera Santez 03 August 2013

sad, simple and amazing. keep on writing. please read some of mine. :)

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Paul Brookes 20 November 2013

beautiful poem full of sadness Liked it BB: O)

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Sally P. P. 17 January 2020

Thanks, Paul, your comment is most welcome.

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Vanessa Hughes 12 September 2013

Really like this poem, so well wrtten x

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 August 2013

i just have one word to describe this poem Brilliant..! ! !

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Joseph Anderson 05 August 2013

Love comes in many shades as you have vividly pointed out. Great delivery of these sad facts

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Kevin Halls 05 August 2013

Good to see your back on form Sally. Like the last verse!

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Sally 25 September 2022

Hi! Kevin. Thanks for your interest. Hope you're okay.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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