Seventh Sense Poem by Lovita Morang

Seventh Sense

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seventh sense

surrounded by these creative elements
of force action
a life begins with a balanced birth
let us call the sense of seventh heaven

sa- inside deep inside the sea like soul creates rhythm call it

re- in rhythm that furthur in the cosmic circulation forms God call it

Ga-so Godly is the divine vibration that mother gives birth to movements call it

Ma- mother in the form of molten matter breath for a period call it

Pa- in these period divinity dance let’s call it

Dha- Divinity furthur transits into another Newness these Newness call it

Ni-into and in these Newness a rebirth resurrects continues to a complete cycle to higher another soul call it
Sa-every things in every situation so precious is connected to a soulic survival.

All so complete like an open endness with another beginning
And death with another LIFE
We all are here…
We all can be here if we have these senses

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesh Mukherji 14 December 2009

life is music, it cannot be sung by every one. Only those whom we love. For all others it cannot. I like how you made this sa, re, ga, ma, pha, da, ni and there is one circle, ni, dha, pha ma ga, re sa, - ni dha, pha ma, and senses come down, slowly to ni only you (in tamil) , sarini (you are right) , so in this sense it is fine to listen. I like the way you have expressed. I am bengali yet use to write and read in tamil. Is not?

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Lovita Morang

Lovita Morang

Arunachal, Assam, india
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