Jason Pacheco

Rookie - 0 Points (June 29,1977 / Fall River, Massachusetts)

Seven Four Five


Some kind of mumbling out
In the hall.
A Multi-language hum from one,
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  • Freshman - 2,098 Points Naveed Khalid (3/20/2014 4:26:00 AM)

    All thumbs up for 745. The first stanza stands apart, leads me down that road rony, rony with such applause! a grab of collage in Hades of a star, burns through haystack of woods... Happy I that A-man holy enough to sense the Lord! Often I've heard of such vile talk at Billy tea house, a girl behind the counter, still checking in with those tickets at Westernly Coffee shop, old Morris car in the garage, can have no repair, the letter box is empty, the first morning news...the spotty dog sniffing of smokey cans from a drop of vintage, cooled in the morning sun, enough! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,782 Points Kevin Patrick (3/26/2013 8:22:00 PM)

    This was absolutely brilliant, the imagery was thought provoking and the language was witty and spontaneous, it ebbed with lots of power a big 10 up (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,639 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/19/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    I like this a lot Jason. It's edgy. It's clever. It covers a lot of ground and it's unafraid. All essential ingredients in the making of a great poem and poet.
    I'm off to read your other stuff. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (2/19/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    Impressive! I like this well elaborated write that is enriched with a reservoir of well phrased words and making this amazing write a powerful one.10+++ Thank you for sharing! WELCOME! to the Poetry World! This write clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Keep it up and give us some more! I will be by your side when needed! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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