Serves Best Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Serves Best

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“You are good poet”
“Simple and quiet”
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I feel their warmth a present

Many write about short comings
Many suggest about some adding
Many suggest even about heading
It gives me so much pleasure in reading

I correct grammar part if noticed
No such mistakes in future is promised
How well being they are to suggest?
I always try to write to the best

If it privilege that they visit our page
Spend sometime and often chase
The concept behind and question
I smile little and reply with mention

It is holy bond
And I am very much fond
They are like mirror
To point out quickly about an errors

So they are semi god
Who carry our load?
For not being misquoted
And in time corrected

To become poet is awesome
It is product of mind and heart as one
Heart responds to mind’s quest
The end product serves as best

Friday, April 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

Post Incredible Douglas Brown1 hour ago I'm absolutely moved by your poetry Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

good drkgbalakrishnan kandangath1 hour ago good Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

its cool Boni ThePoet1 hour ago its cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

“You are good poet” “Simple and quiet”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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