September Rain Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

September Rain

Rating: 4.9


Watching the day disappear,
The restless rain does fall,
Upon the ground,
Reflecting the night of the city,
In the vast, tall, place,
That I am found.

Silence fills the empty streets,
I've passed this way before,
Time and again,
Walking to a place called nowhere,
In the cold, dark, dank,
September rain.

I watch the advertising signs,
Changing to the heartbeat,
Of city night,
Colours of the brands and logos,
On the large, wide, boards,
Do shine so bright.

They try to hypnotise my mind,
But they have no meaning,
They're just a stain,
Of the city that now is sleeping,
Through the cold, dark, dank,
September rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 24 March 2008

Lovely, I can picture it all, most unpleasant place to be. Very well described and a pleasure to read Andrew. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 18 March 2008

The cold dark outlook of a september day, All the best Andrew Love duncan X

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Fred Babbin 08 December 2007

You do get the feeling of bleakness across.

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Thad Wilk 08 December 2007

Andrew, very good write, the descriptive phrases make you feel September Rain! *10*! Thad

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