Separated Poem by Nickey Mason

Separated

Rating: 4.5


i dont know if
we are separated
or done for good.

i dont wanna be
done for good. it
hurts to much.

to see you in the
arms of another
woman is painful.

but if your happy
with her, i guess
im happy as well.

i want us to
work. i want
us to be fit and content.

i never meant to
hurt you. i know
i couldnt please you.

love is a big word
wouldnt you say. i meant
every letter to the fullest.

i wont give up
unless you tell me to
leave you alone.

then i wont have
no choice but to
leave you alone.

confession stated that
i thought if i was to ever
lose you, i wouldnt be
able to find any one else
like you. not that i want to
but you truely are one of
a kind........... :) btw i love you.

La'Veranique
*aka*
dat girl nickey

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 17 August 2010

You write whats in your heart, thats exactly what a poet is meant to do, great job from all the angles, keep up the good work

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a beautiful poem in many was, honest, fresh, insightful. a poet of potential unfolding :)

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Autumn Jones 28 July 2010

Not to bad. Thanks for the suggestion. I give it an 8.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 July 2010

‘you truly are one of a kind........... :) btw i love you.’ ~ so much of premonition …finally happy finish …you’ve ability to carry forward till the last lines …a good poet does so…and you proved it… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Nickey Mason

Nickey Mason

Jackson, Mississippi
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