Sense Of Your Silence! Poem by Siddartha Montik
Sense Of Your Silence!
the moment you went away,
leaving me in this silence of defy!
was such a torture as it began,
were no times in the rest of my run!
went on trying to hold on,
much easy now, not to let you know what goes on!
the pace was increasing on,
more of you in thoughts in a way of submission!
never know I could learn so much in your silence,
but all proving with your eerie promise!
a sincere respect for you and for your silence,
all is working now like a fragrance!
Still I wouldn`t say it is my retreat,
..for, it can never be a honest treat! !
I read your silence, wishing to read more and more to quench the heart's thirst...........thks for the invitation.
Thank you so much Nivedita! ! ! Thank you so much for your comment made me cry, again reminding the pain I liked much! ! ! : (
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Siddartha, such a well crafted poem........10++++++++++++
I read you and feel that, the voice of silence is more louder than noise made by cry....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 8:21:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Awesome. The silence is captured in an extraordinary narration.