Senryu Your Eyes Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes do tease me
playing games full of mischief.
haunt me in my dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 10 October 2013

You convey the language of the eyes in a fascinating way as expected by you...creative indeed...regards

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 09 October 2013

senryu, less tricky than original form of haiku but to make such an impact with only 3 lines - need pretty big skill, Heather has it. she did.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 October 2013

Eyes convey all emotions and show up in dreams. Beautiful poem.

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Efe Benjamin 04 October 2013

wow, this best in all haiku poems i've seen yet, full of teases, lovely and sweet..i'll rate it a +10

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Lorraine Colon 03 October 2013

Very nice, Some eyes can be so captivating we never forget them.

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