Senryu, Xxi Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

Senryu, Xxi



A drunkard

Asks me the way –

I take a sip.

Senryu, Xxi
Tuesday, August 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from ''KARUMI - Haiku & Tanka'', ebook published at Amazon

Translated into English from the original Italian poem (see also the original text)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 10 November 2019

I would have taken a sip too.

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 November 2019

ah ah....... yep :)

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Henry Tong 30 January 2018

Oh very imaginative Senryu! It's so interesting that you make a twist of story in the end.

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 January 2018

in the true spirit of Karai Hachiemon aka Senryū :)

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Homo Sapiens&faber 31 December 2015

very good also in english

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 January 2016

thank you so much for commenting both texts, English and Italian

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 September 2015

Glad to know that you like it, Afrooz. Indeed, I've tried to give the sense of a classical senryu, where humor is most frequently expressed (as modern senryu may avoid humorous themes)

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 03 September 2015

Great! 😄 I like the sense of humor!

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 September 2015

see my reply in the upper box... :)

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